Not sure...
Was this by any chance inspired by Kryptonite - 3 Doors Down..?
Sounds a bit like it. However, your chords mixed smoothly.
If you're going for this kind of music, I'd recommend not computerizing it.
However, if you do, try to find tones that sound a bit more realistic.
Any way you slice it, a guitar should sound like a guitar, not keys on overdrive.
Your sense of pitch and tones is good, just work a bit more on your overall sound. Keep up your enthusiasm, and you'll progress with experience!
Don't lose your spirit, and keep it up! :D